<?xml version="1.0" encoding="UTF-8"?><rss xmlns:dc="http://purl.org/dc/elements/1.1/" xmlns:content="http://purl.org/rss/1.0/modules/content/" xmlns:atom="http://www.w3.org/2005/Atom" version="2.0" xmlns:itunes="http://www.itunes.com/dtds/podcast-1.0.dtd" xmlns:googleplay="http://www.google.com/schemas/play-podcasts/1.0"><channel><title><![CDATA[Key to Storytelling]]></title><description><![CDATA[Teaching aspiring screenwriters and filmmakers how to transform a spark of an idea into an emotionally powerful film audiences will love.]]></description><link>https://keytostorytelling.substack.com</link><image><url>https://substackcdn.com/image/fetch/$s_!V62c!,w_256,c_limit,f_auto,q_auto:good,fl_progressive:steep/https%3A%2F%2Fsubstack-post-media.s3.amazonaws.com%2Fpublic%2Fimages%2F8519f724-c27a-439d-b9d8-84c30378db28_914x914.png</url><title>Key to Storytelling</title><link>https://keytostorytelling.substack.com</link></image><generator>Substack</generator><lastBuildDate>Wed, 04 Nov 2026 09:19:22 GMT</lastBuildDate><atom:link href="iframe.php?url=https%3A%2F%2Fkeytostorytelling.substack.com%2Ffeed" rel="self" type="application/rss+xml"/><copyright><![CDATA[Key to Storytelling]]></copyright><language><![CDATA[en]]></language><webMaster><![CDATA[keytostorytelling@substack.com]]></webMaster><itunes:owner><itunes:email><![CDATA[keytostorytelling@substack.com]]></itunes:email><itunes:name><![CDATA[William Akers]]></itunes:name></itunes:owner><itunes:author><![CDATA[William Akers]]></itunes:author><googleplay:owner><![CDATA[keytostorytelling@substack.com]]></googleplay:owner><googleplay:email><![CDATA[keytostorytelling@substack.com]]></googleplay:email><googleplay:author><![CDATA[William Akers]]></googleplay:author><itunes:block><![CDATA[Yes]]></itunes:block><item><title><![CDATA[Give your actors time to learn]]></title><description><![CDATA[Your characters should look like they know what they&#8217;re doing.]]></description><link>https://keytostorytelling.substack.com/p/give-your-actors-time-to-learn</link><guid isPermaLink="false">https://keytostorytelling.substack.com/p/give-your-actors-time-to-learn</guid><dc:creator><![CDATA[William Akers]]></dc:creator><pubDate>Mon, 26 Oct 2026 19:27:26 GMT</pubDate><enclosure url="iframe.php?url=https%3A%2F%2Fsubstackcdn.com%2Fimage%2Fyoutube%2Fw_728%2Cc_limit%2FZsAo3G6M_EI" length="0" type="image/jpeg"/><content:encoded><![CDATA[<p></p><p>When you&#8217;re making a short or feature, everything you and your crew and actors do will take longer than you think. Especially if your actors need to learn a new skill. Give them heaps of time to master this thing they&#8217;ll have to do on set.</p><p>My favorite recent example (meaning I watched it recently, not that it&#8217;s a recent film) is in BABY DRIVER. There&#8217;s a lovely robbery planning scene where Baby plays an invisible piano in time to Dave Brubeck&#8217;s delightful &#8220;Unsquare Dance&#8221; while everyone (except Jamie Foxx, who stares at Baby) listens to Kevin Spacey explain the plan. Ansel Elgort&#8217;s &#8220;piano&#8221; playing is soooo subtle and so well done, because he worked long and hard to get it right. And it&#8217;s <em>perfect! </em></p><div id="youtube2-ZsAo3G6M_EI" class="youtube-wrap" data-attrs="{&quot;videoId&quot;:&quot;ZsAo3G6M_EI&quot;,&quot;startTime&quot;:null,&quot;endTime&quot;:null}" data-component-name="Youtube2ToDOM"><div class="youtube-inner"><iframe src="iframe.php?url=https%3A%2F%2Fwww.youtube-nocookie.com%2Fembed%2FZsAo3G6M_EI%3Frel%3D0%26amp%3Bautoplay%3D0%26amp%3Bshowinfo%3D0%26amp%3Benablejsapi%3D0" frameborder="0" loading="lazy" gesture="media" allow="autoplay; fullscreen" allowautoplay="true" allowfullscreen="true" width="728" height="409"></iframe></div></div><p>Have you seen the show THE BEAR? Imagine the actors playing chefs didn&#8217;t know how to properly and masterfully handle knives. How convincing would that be? Not very. Jeremy Allen White (Carmen) and Ayo Edebiri (Sydney) went through intensive culinary training programs and worked in real restaurant kitchens to learn how to look like they knew what they were doing.</p><p>The prep paid off.</p><div class="subscription-widget-wrap-editor" data-attrs="{&quot;url&quot;:&quot;https://keytostorytelling.substack.com/subscribe?&quot;,&quot;text&quot;:&quot;Subscribe&quot;,&quot;language&quot;:&quot;en&quot;}" data-component-name="SubscribeWidgetToDOM"><div class="subscription-widget show-subscribe"><div class="preamble"><p class="cta-caption">Key to Storytelling is a reader-supported publication. To receive new posts and support my work, consider becoming a free or paid subscriber.</p></div><form class="subscription-widget-subscribe"><input type="email" class="email-input" name="email" placeholder="Type your email&#8230;" tabindex="-1"><input type="submit" class="button primary" value="Subscribe"><div class="fake-input-wrapper"><div class="fake-input"></div><div class="fake-button"></div></div></form></div></div><p>Go through your script. Are there any skills involved? Playing an instrument, handling a knife, skiing, cleaning a horse&#8217;s hoof, loading a gun, changing a car&#8217;s oil, speaking a foreign language, <em>et cetera</em>. Ask your actor how long it will take to learn this particular skill. Give them more than that amount of time. </p><p>When you get on set, everything is controlled panic. When you&#8217;re shooting you do not want an actor to blow takes because they don&#8217;t have the new skill down like breathing.</p><p>This kind of expertise better be dealt with early in pre-production. Later, it must be beautifully executed on set, preferably with a minimal number of takes.</p><p>Even if you think it&#8217;s a simple task, give them plenty, and I mean <em>plenty</em> of time to learn what you&#8217;re requiring them to do. You&#8217;ll be very happy you did.</p>]]></content:encoded></item><item><title><![CDATA[Give your characters dimension]]></title><description><![CDATA[Draw inspiration from the person you know best.]]></description><link>https://keytostorytelling.substack.com/p/give-your-characters-dimension</link><guid isPermaLink="false">https://keytostorytelling.substack.com/p/give-your-characters-dimension</guid><dc:creator><![CDATA[William Akers]]></dc:creator><pubDate>Sun, 11 Oct 2026 17:12:35 GMT</pubDate><enclosure url="iframe.php?url=https%3A%2F%2Fimages.unsplash.com%2Fphoto-1483546363825-7ebf25fb7513%3Fcrop%3Dentropy%26amp%3Bcs%3Dtinysrgb%26amp%3Bfit%3Dmax%26amp%3Bfm%3Djpg%26amp%3Bixid%3DM3wzMDAzMzh8MHwxfHNlYXJjaHw0fHxqb3VybmFsfGVufDB8fHx8MTc5MTY4ODA5N3ww%26amp%3Bixlib%3Drb-4.1.0%26amp%3Bq%3D80%26amp%3Bw%3D1080" length="0" type="image/jpeg"/><content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Good writers strive to create authenticity in their characters, but creating a brand new person out of thin air is not an easy task. Characters need depth, perspective, and emotional truths that feel real on the page. So how do you do that?</p><p>My advice is to draw inspiration from the person you know best&#8230; <strong>you!</strong></p><p>Even if you&#8217;re not writing an autobiographical story, or even something remotely based on your life, figure out how to write about yourself.</p><div class="captioned-image-container"><figure><div class="image-link image2" data-component-name="Image2ToDOM"><div class="image2-inset"><picture><source type="image/webp" srcset="https://images.unsplash.com/photo-1483546363825-7ebf25fb7513?crop=entropy&amp;cs=tinysrgb&amp;fit=max&amp;fm=jpg&amp;ixid=M3wzMDAzMzh8MHwxfHNlYXJjaHw0fHxqb3VybmFsfGVufDB8fHx8MTc5MTY4ODA5N3ww&amp;ixlib=rb-4.1.0&amp;q=80&amp;w=1080 424w, https://images.unsplash.com/photo-1483546363825-7ebf25fb7513?crop=entropy&amp;cs=tinysrgb&amp;fit=max&amp;fm=jpg&amp;ixid=M3wzMDAzMzh8MHwxfHNlYXJjaHw0fHxqb3VybmFsfGVufDB8fHx8MTc5MTY4ODA5N3ww&amp;ixlib=rb-4.1.0&amp;q=80&amp;w=1080 848w, https://images.unsplash.com/photo-1483546363825-7ebf25fb7513?crop=entropy&amp;cs=tinysrgb&amp;fit=max&amp;fm=jpg&amp;ixid=M3wzMDAzMzh8MHwxfHNlYXJjaHw0fHxqb3VybmFsfGVufDB8fHx8MTc5MTY4ODA5N3ww&amp;ixlib=rb-4.1.0&amp;q=80&amp;w=1080 1272w, https://images.unsplash.com/photo-1483546363825-7ebf25fb7513?crop=entropy&amp;cs=tinysrgb&amp;fit=max&amp;fm=jpg&amp;ixid=M3wzMDAzMzh8MHwxfHNlYXJjaHw0fHxqb3VybmFsfGVufDB8fHx8MTc5MTY4ODA5N3ww&amp;ixlib=rb-4.1.0&amp;q=80&amp;w=1080 1456w" sizes="100vw"><img src="iframe.php?url=https%3A%2F%2Fimages.unsplash.com%2Fphoto-1483546363825-7ebf25fb7513%3Fcrop%3Dentropy%26amp%3Bcs%3Dtinysrgb%26amp%3Bfit%3Dmax%26amp%3Bfm%3Djpg%26amp%3Bixid%3DM3wzMDAzMzh8MHwxfHNlYXJjaHw0fHxqb3VybmFsfGVufDB8fHx8MTc5MTY4ODA5N3ww%26amp%3Bixlib%3Drb-4.1.0%26amp%3Bq%3D80%26amp%3Bw%3D1080" width="346" height="230.66666666666666" data-attrs="{&quot;src&quot;:&quot;https://images.unsplash.com/photo-1483546363825-7ebf25fb7513?crop=entropy&amp;cs=tinysrgb&amp;fit=max&amp;fm=jpg&amp;ixid=M3wzMDAzMzh8MHwxfHNlYXJjaHw0fHxqb3VybmFsfGVufDB8fHx8MTc5MTY4ODA5N3ww&amp;ixlib=rb-4.1.0&amp;q=80&amp;w=1080&quot;,&quot;srcNoWatermark&quot;:null,&quot;fullscreen&quot;:null,&quot;imageSize&quot;:null,&quot;height&quot;:3456,&quot;width&quot;:5184,&quot;resizeWidth&quot;:346,&quot;bytes&quot;:null,&quot;alt&quot;:&quot;brown pencil on white book page&quot;,&quot;title&quot;:null,&quot;type&quot;:&quot;image/jpg&quot;,&quot;href&quot;:null,&quot;belowTheFold&quot;:false,&quot;topImage&quot;:true,&quot;internalRedirect&quot;:null,&quot;isProcessing&quot;:false,&quot;align&quot;:null,&quot;offset&quot;:false}" class="sizing-normal" alt="brown pencil on white book page" title="brown pencil on white book page" srcset="https://images.unsplash.com/photo-1483546363825-7ebf25fb7513?crop=entropy&amp;cs=tinysrgb&amp;fit=max&amp;fm=jpg&amp;ixid=M3wzMDAzMzh8MHwxfHNlYXJjaHw0fHxqb3VybmFsfGVufDB8fHx8MTc5MTY4ODA5N3ww&amp;ixlib=rb-4.1.0&amp;q=80&amp;w=1080 424w, https://images.unsplash.com/photo-1483546363825-7ebf25fb7513?crop=entropy&amp;cs=tinysrgb&amp;fit=max&amp;fm=jpg&amp;ixid=M3wzMDAzMzh8MHwxfHNlYXJjaHw0fHxqb3VybmFsfGVufDB8fHx8MTc5MTY4ODA5N3ww&amp;ixlib=rb-4.1.0&amp;q=80&amp;w=1080 848w, https://images.unsplash.com/photo-1483546363825-7ebf25fb7513?crop=entropy&amp;cs=tinysrgb&amp;fit=max&amp;fm=jpg&amp;ixid=M3wzMDAzMzh8MHwxfHNlYXJjaHw0fHxqb3VybmFsfGVufDB8fHx8MTc5MTY4ODA5N3ww&amp;ixlib=rb-4.1.0&amp;q=80&amp;w=1080 1272w, https://images.unsplash.com/photo-1483546363825-7ebf25fb7513?crop=entropy&amp;cs=tinysrgb&amp;fit=max&amp;fm=jpg&amp;ixid=M3wzMDAzMzh8MHwxfHNlYXJjaHw0fHxqb3VybmFsfGVufDB8fHx8MTc5MTY4ODA5N3ww&amp;ixlib=rb-4.1.0&amp;q=80&amp;w=1080 1456w" sizes="100vw" fetchpriority="high"></picture><div></div></div></div><figcaption class="image-caption">Photo by <a href="iframe.php?url=https%3A%2F%2Funsplash.com%2F%40honza_kahanek">Jan Kah&#225;nek</a> on <a href="iframe.php?url=https%3A%2F%2Funsplash.com">Unsplash</a></figcaption></figure></div><p>Of course, that doesn&#8217;t mean turning your whole manuscript into a diary entry&#8212;it means tapping into your own emotional memory, your inner contradictions, your specific worldview, and channeling that raw material into your characters and narrative. Doing so can unlock a kind of creative energy and authenticity that&#8217;s hard to fake. It makes your characters more complex and your story more resonant.</p><p>If you&#8217;re not digging into your own demons, probing deeply into your soul, trying to figure out your parents or some essential question about humanity that&#8217;s eaten at you since high school, your story may be a bland imitation of other narratives. It may be competent. It may even be structurally sound. But it will lack soul. And that&#8217;s the difference between a story we understand and one we<em> feel</em>.</p><div class="subscription-widget-wrap-editor" data-attrs="{&quot;url&quot;:&quot;https://keytostorytelling.substack.com/subscribe?&quot;,&quot;text&quot;:&quot;Subscribe&quot;,&quot;language&quot;:&quot;en&quot;}" data-component-name="SubscribeWidgetToDOM"><div class="subscription-widget show-subscribe"><div class="preamble"><p class="cta-caption">Key to Storytelling is a reader-supported publication. To receive new posts and support my work, consider becoming a free or paid subscriber.</p></div><form class="subscription-widget-subscribe"><input type="email" class="email-input" name="email" placeholder="Type your email&#8230;" tabindex="-1"><input type="submit" class="button primary" value="Subscribe"><div class="fake-input-wrapper"><div class="fake-input"></div><div class="fake-button"></div></div></form></div></div><p>Adding details from your life and psyche will improve your story in ways you can&#8217;t imagine. And don&#8217;t forget to spread the pieces around! Take your history, chop it into small bits, and infuse them into multiple characters&#8211;not just the main character.</p><p>They say, &#8220;Write what you know,&#8221; and, in this particular instance, I wholeheartedly agree.</p>]]></content:encoded></item><item><title><![CDATA[Is your story visual?]]></title><description><![CDATA[Give your audience something to watch.]]></description><link>https://keytostorytelling.substack.com/p/is-your-story-visual</link><guid isPermaLink="false">https://keytostorytelling.substack.com/p/is-your-story-visual</guid><dc:creator><![CDATA[William Akers]]></dc:creator><pubDate>Sun, 27 Sep 2026 18:54:00 GMT</pubDate><enclosure url="iframe.php?url=https%3A%2F%2Fimages.unsplash.com%2Fphoto-1535016120720-40c646be5580%3Fcrop%3Dentropy%26amp%3Bcs%3Dtinysrgb%26amp%3Bfit%3Dmax%26amp%3Bfm%3Djpg%26amp%3Bixid%3DM3wzMDAzMzh8MHwxfHNlYXJjaHwxfHxwcm9qZWN0b3J8ZW58MHx8fHwxNzkwNTM1MDIzfDA%26amp%3Bixlib%3Drb-4.1.0%26amp%3Bq%3D80%26amp%3Bw%3D1080" length="0" type="image/jpeg"/><content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Screenwriting is about creating blueprints for movies&#8230; a visual medium. Too many writers rely on dialogue to do the heavy lifting and neglect visual storytelling. Don&#8217;t make that same mistake.</p><div class="captioned-image-container"><figure><a class="image-link image2 is-viewable-img" target="_blank" href="iframe.php?url=https%3A%2F%2Fimages.unsplash.com%2Fphoto-1535016120720-40c646be5580%3Fcrop%3Dentropy%26amp%3Bcs%3Dtinysrgb%26amp%3Bfit%3Dmax%26amp%3Bfm%3Djpg%26amp%3Bixid%3DM3wzMDAzMzh8MHwxfHNlYXJjaHwxfHxwcm9qZWN0b3J8ZW58MHx8fHwxNzkwNTM1MDIzfDA%26amp%3Bixlib%3Drb-4.1.0%26amp%3Bq%3D80%26amp%3Bw%3D1080" data-component-name="Image2ToDOM"><div class="image2-inset"><picture><source type="image/webp" srcset="https://images.unsplash.com/photo-1535016120720-40c646be5580?crop=entropy&amp;cs=tinysrgb&amp;fit=max&amp;fm=jpg&amp;ixid=M3wzMDAzMzh8MHwxfHNlYXJjaHwxfHxwcm9qZWN0b3J8ZW58MHx8fHwxNzkwNTM1MDIzfDA&amp;ixlib=rb-4.1.0&amp;q=80&amp;w=1080 424w, 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   ]]></content:encoded></item><item><title><![CDATA[Learn to spot mistakes in your script]]></title><description><![CDATA[Practice makes perfect.]]></description><link>https://keytostorytelling.substack.com/p/learn-to-spot-mistakes-in-your-script</link><guid isPermaLink="false">https://keytostorytelling.substack.com/p/learn-to-spot-mistakes-in-your-script</guid><dc:creator><![CDATA[William Akers]]></dc:creator><pubDate>Tue, 08 Sep 2026 17:50:51 GMT</pubDate><enclosure url="iframe.php?url=https%3A%2F%2Fsubstackcdn.com%2Fimage%2Ffetch%2F%24s_%21JTHH%21%2Cf_auto%2Cq_auto%3Agood%2Cfl_progressive%3Asteep%2Fhttps%253A%252F%252Fsubstack-post-media.s3.amazonaws.com%252Fpublic%252Fimages%252F072cef73-8efa-40df-8649-e7e89ac7d21d_1178x898.png" length="0" type="image/jpeg"/><content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>A fantastic screenplay has to work on all levels&#8212;story idea, character, world, structure, dialogue, voice, and... physical writing (which is our way of saying, &#8220;the words on the page&#8221;). </p><p>Once your main story elements are solid, you can turn your attention to cleaning up the writing itself. Getting rid of mistakes instantly makes your script more professional.</p><p>What would you change about the excerpt below?</p><div class="captioned-image-container"><figure><a class="image-link image2 is-viewable-img" target="_blank" href="iframe.php?url=https%3A%2F%2Fsubstackcdn.com%2Fimage%2Ffetch%2F%24s_%21hdwN%21%2Cf_auto%2Cq_auto%3Agood%2Cfl_progressive%3Asteep%2Fhttps%253A%252F%252Fsubstack-post-media.s3.amazonaws.com%252Fpublic%252Fimages%252F11e6961e-00ee-4ee1-8009-a5f5cae4bf01_1184x934.png" data-component-name="Image2ToDOM"><div class="image2-inset"><picture><source type="image/webp" srcset="https://substackcdn.com/image/fetch/$s_!hdwN!,w_424,c_limit,f_webp,q_auto:good,fl_progressive:steep/https%3A%2F%2Fsubstack-post-media.s3.amazonaws.com%2Fpublic%2Fimages%2F11e6961e-00ee-4ee1-8009-a5f5cae4bf01_1184x934.png 424w, https://substackcdn.com/image/fetch/$s_!hdwN!,w_848,c_limit,f_webp,q_auto:good,fl_progressive:steep/https%3A%2F%2Fsubstack-post-media.s3.amazonaws.com%2Fpublic%2Fimages%2F11e6961e-00ee-4ee1-8009-a5f5cae4bf01_1184x934.png 848w, https://substackcdn.com/image/fetch/$s_!hdwN!,w_1272,c_limit,f_webp,q_auto:good,fl_progressive:steep/https%3A%2F%2Fsubstack-post-media.s3.amazonaws.com%2Fpublic%2Fimages%2F11e6961e-00ee-4ee1-8009-a5f5cae4bf01_1184x934.png 1272w, https://substackcdn.com/image/fetch/$s_!hdwN!,w_1456,c_limit,f_webp,q_auto:good,fl_progressive:steep/https%3A%2F%2Fsubstack-post-media.s3.amazonaws.com%2Fpublic%2Fimages%2F11e6961e-00ee-4ee1-8009-a5f5cae4bf01_1184x934.png 1456w" sizes="100vw"><img src="iframe.php?url=https%3A%2F%2Fsubstackcdn.com%2Fimage%2Ffetch%2F%24s_%21hdwN%21%2Cw_1456%2Cc_limit%2Cf_auto%2Cq_auto%3Agood%2Cfl_progressive%3Asteep%2Fhttps%253A%252F%252Fsubstack-post-media.s3.amazonaws.com%252Fpublic%252Fimages%252F11e6961e-00ee-4ee1-8009-a5f5cae4bf01_1184x934.png" width="1184" height="934" data-attrs="{&quot;src&quot;:&quot;https://substack-post-media.s3.amazonaws.com/public/images/11e6961e-00ee-4ee1-8009-a5f5cae4bf01_1184x934.png&quot;,&quot;srcNoWatermark&quot;:null,&quot;fullscreen&quot;:null,&quot;imageSize&quot;:null,&quot;height&quot;:934,&quot;width&quot;:1184,&quot;resizeWidth&quot;:null,&quot;bytes&quot;:null,&quot;alt&quot;:&quot;&quot;,&quot;title&quot;:null,&quot;type&quot;:null,&quot;href&quot;:null,&quot;belowTheFold&quot;:false,&quot;topImage&quot;:true,&quot;internalRedirect&quot;:null,&quot;isProcessing&quot;:false,&quot;align&quot;:null,&quot;offset&quot;:false}" class="sizing-normal" alt="" title="" srcset="https://substackcdn.com/image/fetch/$s_!hdwN!,w_424,c_limit,f_auto,q_auto:good,fl_progressive:steep/https%3A%2F%2Fsubstack-post-media.s3.amazonaws.com%2Fpublic%2Fimages%2F11e6961e-00ee-4ee1-8009-a5f5cae4bf01_1184x934.png 424w, https://substackcdn.com/image/fetch/$s_!hdwN!,w_848,c_limit,f_auto,q_auto:good,fl_progressive:steep/https%3A%2F%2Fsubstack-post-media.s3.amazonaws.com%2Fpublic%2Fimages%2F11e6961e-00ee-4ee1-8009-a5f5cae4bf01_1184x934.png 848w, https://substackcdn.com/image/fetch/$s_!hdwN!,w_1272,c_limit,f_auto,q_auto:good,fl_progressive:steep/https%3A%2F%2Fsubstack-post-media.s3.amazonaws.com%2Fpublic%2Fimages%2F11e6961e-00ee-4ee1-8009-a5f5cae4bf01_1184x934.png 1272w, https://substackcdn.com/image/fetch/$s_!hdwN!,w_1456,c_limit,f_auto,q_auto:good,fl_progressive:steep/https%3A%2F%2Fsubstack-post-media.s3.amazonaws.com%2Fpublic%2Fimages%2F11e6961e-00ee-4ee1-8009-a5f5cae4bf01_1184x934.png 1456w" sizes="100vw" fetchpriority="high"></picture><div class="image-link-expand"><div class="pencraft pc-display-flex pc-gap-8 pc-reset"><button tabindex="0" type="button" class="pencraft pc-reset pencraft icon-container restack-image buttonBase-GK1x3M"><svg aria-hidden="true" width="20" height="20" viewBox="0 0 20 20" fill="none" stroke-width="1.5" stroke="var(--color-fg-primary)" stroke-linecap="round" stroke-linejoin="round" xmlns="http://www.w3.org/2000/svg" class="icon-noB79L"><g><path d="M2.53001 7.81595C3.49179 4.73911 6.43281 2.5 9.91173 2.5C13.1684 2.5 15.9537 4.46214 17.0852 7.23684L17.6179 8.67647M17.6179 8.67647L18.5002 4.26471M17.6179 8.67647L13.6473 6.91176M17.4995 12.1841C16.5378 15.2609 13.5967 17.5 10.1178 17.5C6.86118 17.5 4.07589 15.5379 2.94432 12.7632L2.41165 11.3235M2.41165 11.3235L1.5293 15.7353M2.41165 11.3235L6.38224 13.0882"></path></g></svg></button><button tabindex="0" type="button" class="pencraft pc-reset pencraft icon-container view-image buttonBase-GK1x3M"><svg xmlns="http://www.w3.org/2000/svg" width="20" height="20" viewBox="0 0 24 24" fill="none" stroke="currentColor" stroke-width="2" stroke-linecap="round" stroke-linejoin="round" class="lucide lucide-maximize2 lucide-maximize-2 icon-noB79L"><polyline points="15 3 21 3 21 9"></polyline><polyline points="9 21 3 21 3 15"></polyline><line x1="21" x2="14" y1="3" y2="10"></line><line x1="3" x2="10" y1="21" y2="14"></line></svg></button></div></div></div></a></figure></div>
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Sometimes you only get a tiny shred of a wisp of an actual idea.</span></p><p><span>My initial inkling for a story about the fall of Saigon came after I read an article in Rolling Stone by Hunter S. Thompson. During the fall&#8230;</span></p>
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   ]]></content:encoded></item><item><title><![CDATA[A tip for your short film]]></title><description><![CDATA[Paying attention to this makes a big difference...]]></description><link>https://keytostorytelling.substack.com/p/a-tip-for-your-short-film</link><guid isPermaLink="false">https://keytostorytelling.substack.com/p/a-tip-for-your-short-film</guid><dc:creator><![CDATA[William Akers]]></dc:creator><pubDate>Thu, 27 Aug 2026 19:27:54 GMT</pubDate><enclosure url="iframe.php?url=https%3A%2F%2Fimages.unsplash.com%2Fphoto-1632187989763-c9c620420b4d%3Fcrop%3Dentropy%26amp%3Bcs%3Dtinysrgb%26amp%3Bfit%3Dmax%26amp%3Bfm%3Djpg%26amp%3Bixid%3DM3wzMDAzMzh8MHwxfHNlYXJjaHw4fHxzaG9ydCUyMGZpbG18ZW58MHx8fHwxNzg3ODU4MTUyfDA%26amp%3Bixlib%3Drb-4.1.0%26amp%3Bq%3D80%26amp%3Bw%3D1080" length="0" type="image/jpeg"/><content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>A lot of my advice is for screenwriters, but this one is for the filmmakers out there&#8230;</p><p>Do you know what a &#8220;clothing pass&#8221; is? If not, I&#8217;m happy to tell you.</p><div class="captioned-image-container"><figure><a class="image-link image2 is-viewable-img" target="_blank" href="iframe.php?url=https%3A%2F%2Fimages.unsplash.com%2Fphoto-1632187989763-c9c620420b4d%3Fcrop%3Dentropy%26amp%3Bcs%3Dtinysrgb%26amp%3Bfit%3Dmax%26amp%3Bfm%3Djpg%26amp%3Bixid%3DM3wzMDAzMzh8MHwxfHNlYXJjaHw4fHxzaG9ydCUyMGZpbG18ZW58MHx8fHwxNzg3ODU4MTUyfDA%26amp%3Bixlib%3Drb-4.1.0%26amp%3Bq%3D80%26amp%3Bw%3D1080" data-component-name="Image2ToDOM"><div class="image2-inset"><picture><source type="image/webp" srcset="https://images.unsplash.com/photo-1632187989763-c9c620420b4d?crop=entropy&amp;cs=tinysrgb&amp;fit=max&amp;fm=jpg&amp;ixid=M3wzMDAzMzh8MHwxfHNlYXJjaHw4fHxzaG9ydCUyMGZpbG18ZW58MHx8fHwxNzg3ODU4MTUyfDA&amp;ixlib=rb-4.1.0&amp;q=80&amp;w=1080 424w, 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   ]]></content:encoded></item><item><title><![CDATA[Can you fix this?]]></title><description><![CDATA[Learn from another writer's mistakes.]]></description><link>https://keytostorytelling.substack.com/p/can-you-fix-this</link><guid isPermaLink="false">https://keytostorytelling.substack.com/p/can-you-fix-this</guid><dc:creator><![CDATA[William Akers]]></dc:creator><pubDate>Sat, 22 Aug 2026 17:01:41 GMT</pubDate><enclosure url="iframe.php?url=https%3A%2F%2Fsubstackcdn.com%2Fimage%2Ffetch%2F%24s_%21qnWp%21%2Cf_auto%2Cq_auto%3Agood%2Cfl_progressive%3Asteep%2Fhttps%253A%252F%252Fsubstack-post-media.s3.amazonaws.com%252Fpublic%252Fimages%252Fbeb0aa67-0111-46c9-97e3-5c626c2eed83_1136x870.png" length="0" type="image/jpeg"/><content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>We&#8217;re big believers in the power of good writing. It doesn&#8217;t matter how amazing your story is if the writing is sloppy. The list of potential problems is long. Watch out for spelling errors, formatting mistakes, logic flaws, bad dialogue, unnecessary repetition, and more.</p><p>To help you spot problems in your own writing, practice finding them in someone else&#8217;s. Take a look at the excerpt below. 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   ]]></content:encoded></item><item><title><![CDATA[Advice for writers and evil overlords]]></title><description><![CDATA[Be on the lookout this mistake in your writing.]]></description><link>https://keytostorytelling.substack.com/p/advice-for-writers-and-evil-overlords</link><guid isPermaLink="false">https://keytostorytelling.substack.com/p/advice-for-writers-and-evil-overlords</guid><dc:creator><![CDATA[William Akers]]></dc:creator><pubDate>Thu, 20 Aug 2026 17:02:01 GMT</pubDate><enclosure url="iframe.php?url=https%3A%2F%2Fimages.unsplash.com%2Fphoto-1503506740427-75e585ba5298%3Fcrop%3Dentropy%26amp%3Bcs%3Dtinysrgb%26amp%3Bfit%3Dmax%26amp%3Bfm%3Djpg%26amp%3Bixid%3DM3wzMDAzMzh8MHwxfHNlYXJjaHwyOHx8YWlyZHVjdHN8ZW58MHx8fHwxNzg3MDYwMzg1fDA%26amp%3Bixlib%3Drb-4.1.0%26amp%3Bq%3D80%26amp%3Bw%3D1080" length="0" type="image/jpeg"/><content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Years ago, I came across a wonderful list, &#8220;<strong><a href="iframe.php?url=https%3A%2F%2Fkey2storytelling.krtra.com%2Fc%2FP2qf8MDpSUa4%2FrXAp"><span>The Top 100 Things I&#8217;d Do If I Ever Became An Evil Overlord</span></a></strong>&#8220; by Peter Anspach. While I don&#8217;t think becoming an Evil Overlord is something you should strive for, the list features a hundred examples of boneheaded moves an Evil Overlord should avoid.</p><p>My favorite is, &#8220;My ventilation ducts will be too small to crawl through.&#8221;</p><div class="captioned-image-container"><figure><a class="image-link image2 is-viewable-img" target="_blank" href="iframe.php?url=https%3A%2F%2Fimages.unsplash.com%2Fphoto-1503506740427-75e585ba5298%3Fcrop%3Dentropy%26amp%3Bcs%3Dtinysrgb%26amp%3Bfit%3Dmax%26amp%3Bfm%3Djpg%26amp%3Bixid%3DM3wzMDAzMzh8MHwxfHNlYXJjaHwyOHx8YWlyZHVjdHN8ZW58MHx8fHwxNzg3MDYwMzg1fDA%26amp%3Bixlib%3Drb-4.1.0%26amp%3Bq%3D80%26amp%3Bw%3D1080" data-component-name="Image2ToDOM"><div class="image2-inset"><picture><source type="image/webp" 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It makes such simple sense! Why would anyone with half a brain allow an easy point of entry all the way from the street to their Control Room of Doom?!</p>
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Those things are crucial elements of a successful story. But don&#8217;t forget about a third important factor&#8230; <strong>stakes</strong>.</p><p>What <em><span>horrible</span></em> thing will happen if your main character doesn&#8217;t get what they want? Noti&#8230;</p>
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   ]]></content:encoded></item><item><title><![CDATA[Writing better dialogue]]></title><description><![CDATA[Quick tips for writing dialogue that sounds real.]]></description><link>https://keytostorytelling.substack.com/p/writing-better-dialogue</link><guid isPermaLink="false">https://keytostorytelling.substack.com/p/writing-better-dialogue</guid><dc:creator><![CDATA[William Akers]]></dc:creator><pubDate>Fri, 31 Jul 2026 17:29:10 GMT</pubDate><enclosure url="iframe.php?url=https%3A%2F%2Fimages.unsplash.com%2Fphoto-1694878981964-c9d8f1ffc19d%3Fcrop%3Dentropy%26amp%3Bcs%3Dtinysrgb%26amp%3Bfit%3Dmax%26amp%3Bfm%3Djpg%26amp%3Bixid%3DM3wzMDAzMzh8MHwxfHNlYXJjaHw1fHxzcGVlY2glMjBidWJibGVzfGVufDB8fHx8MTc4NTI1OTY3MXww%26amp%3Bixlib%3Drb-4.1.0%26amp%3Bq%3D80%26amp%3Bw%3D1080" length="0" type="image/jpeg"/><content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Dialogue is the heartbeat of a great screenplay. It helps drive the plot forward and is where your characters come to life and reveal their true selves. Crafting dialogue that resonates and feels authentic can be a challenge.</p><div class="captioned-image-container"><figure><a class="image-link image2 is-viewable-img" target="_blank" href="iframe.php?url=https%3A%2F%2Fimages.unsplash.com%2Fphoto-1694878981964-c9d8f1ffc19d%3Fcrop%3Dentropy%26amp%3Bcs%3Dtinysrgb%26amp%3Bfit%3Dmax%26amp%3Bfm%3Djpg%26amp%3Bixid%3DM3wzMDAzMzh8MHwxfHNlYXJjaHw1fHxzcGVlY2glMjBidWJibGVzfGVufDB8fHx8MTc4NTI1OTY3MXww%26amp%3Bixlib%3Drb-4.1.0%26amp%3Bq%3D80%26amp%3Bw%3D1080" data-component-name="Image2ToDOM"><div class="image2-inset"><picture><source type="image/webp" srcset="https://images.unsplash.com/photo-1694878981964-c9d8f1ffc19d?crop=entropy&amp;cs=tinysrgb&amp;fit=max&amp;fm=jpg&amp;ixid=M3wzMDAzMzh8MHwxfHNlYXJjaHw1fHxzcGVlY2glMjBidWJibGVzfGVufDB8fHx8MTc4NTI1OTY3MXww&amp;ixlib=rb-4.1.0&amp;q=80&amp;w=1080 424w, 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Making dialogue more efficient helps with pacing and can make the line sound more realistic. (Note: This is not to imply that the shortest version is the &#8220;right&#8221; version. When deciding how to write their dialogue, always take into account how your characters speak.)</p><p>Below, we&#8217;ll walk you through an example of how a few simple changes can improve the lines in your script and give you another useful tip for strengthening your dialogue&#8230;</p>
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Any old name <em><span>won&#8217;t </span></em>do.</p><p>There&#8217;s the usual &#8220;no character names that rhyme&#8221; and &#8220;no names beginning with the same letter.&#8221; All that &#8220;don&#8217;t confuse &#8216;em&#8221; stuff. But today&#8217;s topic is simply the NAMES.</p><p>This past Halloween, I was in a tea shop and everyone behind the counter was in costume. One woman was wearing a tan jumpsuit. Name tag: Spengler. I&#8217;ve never met <em><span>anyone</span></em> named Spengler, but I instantly knew her favorite character was Dr. Egon Spengler in GHOSTBUSTERS. Try to think of unique names readers will remember forty years later!</p>
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   ]]></content:encoded></item><item><title><![CDATA[Writing is like a broken heart]]></title><description><![CDATA[The struggle is real.]]></description><link>https://keytostorytelling.substack.com/p/writing-is-like-a-broken-heart</link><guid isPermaLink="false">https://keytostorytelling.substack.com/p/writing-is-like-a-broken-heart</guid><dc:creator><![CDATA[William Akers]]></dc:creator><pubDate>Mon, 27 Jul 2026 18:00:26 GMT</pubDate><enclosure url="iframe.php?url=https%3A%2F%2Fsubstackcdn.com%2Fimage%2Ffetch%2F%24s_%219arE%21%2Cf_auto%2Cq_auto%3Agood%2Cfl_progressive%3Asteep%2Fhttps%253A%252F%252Fsubstack-post-media.s3.amazonaws.com%252Fpublic%252Fimages%252Fb7398dc9-931b-4093-ae4f-78e3779b6b32_1244x876.webp" length="0" type="image/jpeg"/><content:encoded><![CDATA[<h4 style="text-align: center;"><strong>"A writer is someone for whom writing is more difficult than it is for other people." - Thomas Mann<br></strong></h4><p><span>The more I write, the more I understand the terrible rigor it entails. For a beginner, the writer&#8217;s agony is more difficult.</span></p><p><span>I compare it to romance.</span></p><p><span>I hope, if you&#8217;ve been in love, that you&#8217;ve never been dumped. A broken heart is the worst, especially the f&#8230;</span></p>
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   ]]></content:encoded></item><item><title><![CDATA[Make them suffer]]></title><description><![CDATA[Stop being so nice to your main character!]]></description><link>https://keytostorytelling.substack.com/p/make-them-suffer</link><guid isPermaLink="false">https://keytostorytelling.substack.com/p/make-them-suffer</guid><dc:creator><![CDATA[William Akers]]></dc:creator><pubDate>Tue, 21 Jul 2026 17:47:35 GMT</pubDate><enclosure url="iframe.php?url=https%3A%2F%2Fsubstackcdn.com%2Fimage%2Ffetch%2F%24s_%21bi3_%21%2Cf_auto%2Cq_auto%3Agood%2Cfl_progressive%3Asteep%2Fhttps%253A%252F%252Fsubstack-post-media.s3.amazonaws.com%252Fpublic%252Fimages%252F47a787c7-21ac-4911-94ab-a3997a2ea524_1944x1288.png" length="0" type="image/jpeg"/><content:encoded><![CDATA[<p><span>If you&#8217;ve got an outline or a draft, go through it and write down how many times you make your main character suffer. You may be surprised at how little you have tortured them.</span></p><p><span>To have a triumph at the end, they must suffer greatly from the beginning, through the middle, all the way to that triumph. If they have suffered greatly, the victory will be swee&#8230;</span></p>
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   ]]></content:encoded></item><item><title><![CDATA[Are these mistakes in your script?]]></title><description><![CDATA[Learn to spot and solve problems in your writing.]]></description><link>https://keytostorytelling.substack.com/p/are-these-mistakes-in-your-script</link><guid isPermaLink="false">https://keytostorytelling.substack.com/p/are-these-mistakes-in-your-script</guid><dc:creator><![CDATA[William Akers]]></dc:creator><pubDate>Thu, 16 Jul 2026 17:36:10 GMT</pubDate><enclosure url="iframe.php?url=https%3A%2F%2Fsubstack-post-media.s3.amazonaws.com%2Fpublic%2Fimages%2F1c17c358-9a12-4058-9317-537421e630b9_1536x1024.png" length="0" type="image/jpeg"/><content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>The person reading your script can tell on the first page if you&#8217;re a strong writer or not. They&#8217;ll have to read more to know if you&#8217;re a good storyteller, but by the end of page one, they know what kind of writer you are. It&#8217;s up to you to impress them right away. Scripts that are riddled with mistakes or sloppy sentences stand out for all the wrong reasons. It&#8217;s critical to learn to spot problems and fix them.</p><p> What errors can you find in the opening scene below?</p><div class="captioned-image-container"><figure><a class="image-link image2 is-viewable-img" target="_blank" href="iframe.php?url=https%3A%2F%2Fsubstackcdn.com%2Fimage%2Ffetch%2F%24s_%219btK%21%2Cf_auto%2Cq_auto%3Agood%2Cfl_progressive%3Asteep%2Fhttps%253A%252F%252Fsubstack-post-media.s3.amazonaws.com%252Fpublic%252Fimages%252Fcea07d6b-ca46-4efd-ad30-6e70c809253f_1116x896.png" data-component-name="Image2ToDOM"><div class="image2-inset"><picture><source type="image/webp" srcset="https://substackcdn.com/image/fetch/$s_!9btK!,w_424,c_limit,f_webp,q_auto:good,fl_progressive:steep/https%3A%2F%2Fsubstack-post-media.s3.amazonaws.com%2Fpublic%2Fimages%2Fcea07d6b-ca46-4efd-ad30-6e70c809253f_1116x896.png 424w, https://substackcdn.com/image/fetch/$s_!9btK!,w_848,c_limit,f_webp,q_auto:good,fl_progressive:steep/https%3A%2F%2Fsubstack-post-media.s3.amazonaws.com%2Fpublic%2Fimages%2Fcea07d6b-ca46-4efd-ad30-6e70c809253f_1116x896.png 848w, https://substackcdn.com/image/fetch/$s_!9btK!,w_1272,c_limit,f_webp,q_auto:good,fl_progressive:steep/https%3A%2F%2Fsubstack-post-media.s3.amazonaws.com%2Fpublic%2Fimages%2Fcea07d6b-ca46-4efd-ad30-6e70c809253f_1116x896.png 1272w, https://substackcdn.com/image/fetch/$s_!9btK!,w_1456,c_limit,f_webp,q_auto:good,fl_progressive:steep/https%3A%2F%2Fsubstack-post-media.s3.amazonaws.com%2Fpublic%2Fimages%2Fcea07d6b-ca46-4efd-ad30-6e70c809253f_1116x896.png 1456w" sizes="100vw"><img src="iframe.php?url=https%3A%2F%2Fsubstackcdn.com%2Fimage%2Ffetch%2F%24s_%219btK%21%2Cw_1456%2Cc_limit%2Cf_auto%2Cq_auto%3Agood%2Cfl_progressive%3Asteep%2Fhttps%253A%252F%252Fsubstack-post-media.s3.amazonaws.com%252Fpublic%252Fimages%252Fcea07d6b-ca46-4efd-ad30-6e70c809253f_1116x896.png" width="1116" height="896" data-attrs="{&quot;src&quot;:&quot;https://substack-post-media.s3.amazonaws.com/public/images/cea07d6b-ca46-4efd-ad30-6e70c809253f_1116x896.png&quot;,&quot;srcNoWatermark&quot;:null,&quot;fullscreen&quot;:null,&quot;imageSize&quot;:null,&quot;height&quot;:896,&quot;width&quot;:1116,&quot;resizeWidth&quot;:null,&quot;bytes&quot;:null,&quot;alt&quot;:&quot;&quot;,&quot;title&quot;:null,&quot;type&quot;:null,&quot;href&quot;:null,&quot;belowTheFold&quot;:false,&quot;topImage&quot;:true,&quot;internalRedirect&quot;:null,&quot;isProcessing&quot;:false,&quot;align&quot;:null,&quot;offset&quot;:false}" class="sizing-normal" alt="" title="" srcset="https://substackcdn.com/image/fetch/$s_!9btK!,w_424,c_limit,f_auto,q_auto:good,fl_progressive:steep/https%3A%2F%2Fsubstack-post-media.s3.amazonaws.com%2Fpublic%2Fimages%2Fcea07d6b-ca46-4efd-ad30-6e70c809253f_1116x896.png 424w, https://substackcdn.com/image/fetch/$s_!9btK!,w_848,c_limit,f_auto,q_auto:good,fl_progressive:steep/https%3A%2F%2Fsubstack-post-media.s3.amazonaws.com%2Fpublic%2Fimages%2Fcea07d6b-ca46-4efd-ad30-6e70c809253f_1116x896.png 848w, https://substackcdn.com/image/fetch/$s_!9btK!,w_1272,c_limit,f_auto,q_auto:good,fl_progressive:steep/https%3A%2F%2Fsubstack-post-media.s3.amazonaws.com%2Fpublic%2Fimages%2Fcea07d6b-ca46-4efd-ad30-6e70c809253f_1116x896.png 1272w, https://substackcdn.com/image/fetch/$s_!9btK!,w_1456,c_limit,f_auto,q_auto:good,fl_progressive:steep/https%3A%2F%2Fsubstack-post-media.s3.amazonaws.com%2Fpublic%2Fimages%2Fcea07d6b-ca46-4efd-ad30-6e70c809253f_1116x896.png 1456w" sizes="100vw" fetchpriority="high"></picture><div class="image-link-expand"><div class="pencraft pc-display-flex pc-gap-8 pc-reset"><button tabindex="0" type="button" class="pencraft pc-reset pencraft icon-container restack-image buttonBase-GK1x3M"><svg aria-hidden="true" width="20" height="20" viewBox="0 0 20 20" fill="none" stroke-width="1.5" stroke="var(--color-fg-primary)" stroke-linecap="round" stroke-linejoin="round" xmlns="http://www.w3.org/2000/svg" class="icon-noB79L"><g><path d="M2.53001 7.81595C3.49179 4.73911 6.43281 2.5 9.91173 2.5C13.1684 2.5 15.9537 4.46214 17.0852 7.23684L17.6179 8.67647M17.6179 8.67647L18.5002 4.26471M17.6179 8.67647L13.6473 6.91176M17.4995 12.1841C16.5378 15.2609 13.5967 17.5 10.1178 17.5C6.86118 17.5 4.07589 15.5379 2.94432 12.7632L2.41165 11.3235M2.41165 11.3235L1.5293 15.7353M2.41165 11.3235L6.38224 13.0882"></path></g></svg></button><button tabindex="0" type="button" class="pencraft pc-reset pencraft icon-container view-image buttonBase-GK1x3M"><svg xmlns="http://www.w3.org/2000/svg" width="20" height="20" viewBox="0 0 24 24" fill="none" stroke="currentColor" stroke-width="2" stroke-linecap="round" stroke-linejoin="round" class="lucide lucide-maximize2 lucide-maximize-2 icon-noB79L"><polyline points="15 3 21 3 21 9"></polyline><polyline points="9 21 3 21 3 15"></polyline><line x1="21" x2="14" y1="3" y2="10"></line><line x1="3" x2="10" y1="21" y2="14"></line></svg></button></div></div></div></a></figure></div><p>This might seem passable, but there are a lot of places the writer could improve the excerpt above&#8230;</p>
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   ]]></content:encoded></item><item><title><![CDATA[Writers, don’t micromanage actors]]></title><description><![CDATA[Let them do the job they were hired to do.]]></description><link>https://keytostorytelling.substack.com/p/writers-dont-micromanage-actors</link><guid isPermaLink="false">https://keytostorytelling.substack.com/p/writers-dont-micromanage-actors</guid><dc:creator><![CDATA[William Akers]]></dc:creator><pubDate>Mon, 13 Jul 2026 16:16:10 GMT</pubDate><enclosure url="iframe.php?url=https%3A%2F%2Fsubstackcdn.com%2Fimage%2Ffetch%2F%24s_%21DU-v%21%2Cf_auto%2Cq_auto%3Agood%2Cfl_progressive%3Asteep%2Fhttps%253A%252F%252Fsubstack-post-media.s3.amazonaws.com%252Fpublic%252Fimages%252F1cd49021-67dc-46ab-9526-e4d652371751_1402x1122.png" length="0" type="image/jpeg"/><content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>You&#8217;re writing your script to be <em><span>made</span></em>. Crew members will read it. Heads of departments will read it. Actors will read it.</p><p><span>When you write, you imagine a scene, floating in glorious living color above your computer. You watch the scene in great detail. Over and over, you replay it and re</span></p><p><span>do it. When you&#8217;re satisfied, you write it down. Generally, the first &#8230;</span></p>
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